thats kinda obvious , dumbass . but its not the point, i get what it is ,but not the dialogue . but that doesn't matter cuz don't feel like starting a internet fight with someone i don't know over a comic.
There where no cool (cold) colors in sight, except for the end pic. Really nice, but i found something about about the speech bubbles containing handwritten letters. Was it made in a rush when you were nearing completion?
They just seem crooked and out of order. It breaks or gives false imagination of their voices. The colors of the letters is in good use though, that is the thing that identifies and gives voice imagination. However, i can understand if that is the style your looking for. And i am not speaking professionally because this is coming out of my own comfort/oppinion
Also, have to comment on no use of cold colors again. Still amazes and gives me warmth. I need to do something like that too once. Did you keep a stern use of color pallet when you where making this?
I just randomly clicked on your page, and in two seconds I said 'This person is probably going to get a new watcher in five minutes'. You're at least going to get a llama before I get off of this page, because this is awesome.